The distant echo of following feet,
Teased and tormented my ears.
I didn’t know that tonight was the night
To have listened to my mother’s fears.
He stopped my cries with a rough angry hand
My heart with a plunge of the knife.
I’m not the first girl he’s sent to the grave
For looking just like his ex wife.
Wounds in my flesh matched the wounds in the hearts
of the loved ones that I left behind.
Sometimes the darkness of our crazy world
Can ruin far more than the mind.
Wow, what a drama. ❤
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Thanks! I’m glad you like it 🙂
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Wow. That’s really powerful. It’s very vivid in image and emotion.
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Thanks! It certainly got to me as I was writing it.
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Good job!
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Thanks! I thought I’d go for a simple poem during my lunch break at work and that was the outcome. Influenced just slightly by reading about Jack the Ripper!
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I’m always impressed with people who can write poetry. Beyond a limerick or two, I just cannot do it. 😀
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Haha! I used to love it when i was at school but i really struggle to write poetry that doesn’t rhyme.
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